Anyone want to comment on my poem, ECT? It's about ia Weevil (Hughes' mistress and then wife after Plath?

This is excellent - the opening line grabs you and drags you into the controversy. The second verse is wonderful, calling our attention to fine details and saying such a lot about Plath....and so on. Very interesting (especially as I know very little about Ted Hughes and Sylvia Plath save her depression and being weighed down by children.)